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Burroway Notes and Comments: Chapter 2

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A quick note

to my regular readers (all three of you): I’m reading the textbook Writing Fiction by Janet Burroway and co. and taking notes as I go along. I started for my own benefit, but after I finished the first chapter I figured I’d post my notes and comments over at Reddit’s r/writing community. The folks there were pretty keen for me to continue, but unfortunately the character limit on self posts is only 10,000, so I’ve had to host the notes from the second chapter here.

To be honest it’s kind of better this way because it means I don’t have to dick around with reformatting the posts, I can just copy and paste straight in from Word. Notes start after the jump, and be sure to let me know if there’s anything I can improve. This is not by any means a comprehensive covering of all the topics that Burroway goes through; if you want that, buy the book.

You can buy Writing Fiction at Amazon (Latest edition) or Book Depository (International edition — the one I’m following) if you want to follow along. As far as I can tell, the differences between versions are mainly the short stories included as examples.

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photo by: emdot

SciencePod — Extraordinary glass

Photo Credit: Mark Ediger/University of Wisconsin-Madison

Something different for

the beginning of the week. I’m trying out something new, picking a breaking bit of science that requires a bit of background explanation to understand and, well, explaining it. This first discovery is to do with the production of a more stable form of glass using vapour deposition. The article was first accessed on Eurekalert. Listen to the podcast to learn a bit more about glass, amorphous and crystal structures, and what they might be used for in the future. Transcript with extra links for pretty pictures and such are below (after the jump for RSS peeps).

Let me know in the comments if you have any ideas on how I can improve!

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Furry: an addendum

 

Just a quick

follow-up to my previous post about The Rabbit Hole (being the 30,000 words in 3 days extravaganza thrown by the EWF). Yesterday I went into the library to throw down a session of writing. It’s the second time I’ve been to the library to do this, and the first when I’ve had something to work on that wasn’t editing. Over a period of around three or four hours, I got down 2,798 words. Okay, so it’s not a book in a day, but it’s not bad. Thing is, I don’t think I’d have been able to put aside my internal editor and just write like that if I hadn’t been involved in the Rabbit Hole. So again, big shout outs to Sam and Patrick, and everyone else who was involved in Team Awesome. Seems like the rabbit hole will keep winding its way down.

(photograph: Ice mask, C.T. Madigan, between 1911-1914 / photograph by Frank Hurley)

Taste

At this point

I’m fairly sure that anyone that occasionally skims this blog will have seen the above typographic video quoting Ira Glass in his talk about creativity. If you haven’t, the magic of the interwebbles means that you are able to click the little play button up there and do so now.

The gist of the quote is that when creatives start out making art, there is a gap between their (great) taste and their (not-so-great) skill in creating art based on that taste. And that leads a lot of them to quit. The reassurance given by Glass is that although we may realise that what we are making isn’t up the standards set by our taste, if we keep working through it, eventually our work will be as good as we want it to be. The question that occurred to me last night–during a dinner of garlic and butter (and the occasional mussel)–was where the digital taste portfolios of the current-day Internet fit into this relationship.

‘Digital taste portfolios’ may not be the most eloquent term for it, but it’s early and I haven’t quite woken up properly yet, so forgive me that one. By that term, I’m referring to the tumblrs, the pinterests, the Facebook groups, and the blogs that collect content from around the world and amalgamate them into a rolling boulder of taste. And the main thing I’m pondering is to what extent these portfolios short-circuit the relationship between taste, work, and creativity on an individual basis.

A while ago I tried to turn this blog into one of those content accumulators; mainly because I admired the ones that I read, such as TYWKIWDBI and the J-Walk blog (now sadly closed). And while it was fun, scouring the Internet archives for bits and pieces of knowledge, it didn’t really take off for me because a) at the time it was actually really hard to find original content that hadn’t been covered a billion times already, and b) it was very time-consuming to find the piece, comment on it, upload/format the images/video, etc. the way I wanted.

These days it’s a lot easier to share your taste. Quite often it’s literally a click or two and presto! The photo you saw, the fashion design you adored, the article about life in Iraq as a popsicle stand salesman you cried while reading are added to a very public display of your taste. And if you’re getting comments, likes, notes, retweets, pageviews, <insert generic, statistically interpretable, positive reinforcement mechanism here>, isn’t that a disincentive to producing original art in ways that display your taste? Why spend hours honing your craft to make it meet the level of your taste when you can make a couple of one millimetre depressions with your index finger and achieve an approximation? Are we losing original creators to a short cut?

I should note I don’t think this is really a question that can be answered confidently. If I’m honest I’m not even really that sure if it’s a valid question. If I were to take a stab at it I’d suspect that creatives that share in this way would almost certainly still be creating original content in addition to their (cringe) digital taste portfolio. I’m sure that any exposure to new and interesting ideas, designs, art is feeding the muse for future projects. And obviously in order to be able to share awesome creative things with each other, there has to be at least someone out there making the awesome creative things to be shared. I’m just a little circumspect of where the logical conclusion to all this sharing and resharing and taste…well, taste boasting is. Do people out exist there that have turned away from the creation of original art to favour the sharing of art they would have loved to have made?

Anyway, enough of this musing, I have a full batch of RSS feeds to read through to see what amazing things people have found lately. HUR HUR.

Prize

Just a cross-

post to say that I have announced the winner of the first toothsoup prize over at the competition website. As I mention in the announcement video, judging the competition was way harder than I thought it would be. I’ve learned a lot from the process though, and I’ll be applying those lessons to the next round. For example, quite often it was the case that the smaller word count meant that the stories weren’t able to really show off their full potential. I’ll be fixing that with an extended word count; probably around 3,000 as that’s the standard in the Australian publishing industry.

The other thing I noticed was that being all-inclusive with regards to theme and genre makes it really hard to judge entries against each other when they’re as disparate as those I received. So I will most likely include a theme in the next round, but I’ll be retaining the open nature with regards to genre.

I was also really surprised by the number of people that donated. It ended up being pretty much a 50% split between those who did and didn’t, whereas I expected maybe 25% if I was lucky. I think the donation going towards the final prize is a good idea, so I’ll be keeping that going, as well as covering the shortfall introduced by submittable’s fees. I’m not sure if I’ll amend the terms and conditions to allow me to split the prize money how I feel it’s necessary to do so, but if I do I’ll make sure I make it loud and clear on the entry form.

Anyway, just thought I’d mirror that here. Keep an eye out for the next round’s announcement, as well as interviews and audio recordings of the stories by the authors, and thanks again to all that contributed.